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BabyT'Breezey
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since 2006-12-15
Posts 11
USA

0 posted 2006-12-15 01:21 AM


I can hear the sound of a crying baby next to my head,
i turned around and looked in the bed,
i asked my self "what had i done"
and told my self this wasnt gonna be fun,
i wish i could somewhat change what happend,
i didnt know how to explain why i had gotten suspended,
and all i could say was im sorry
and that they didnt have to worry

as i packed my stuff to leave
i couldn't believe that i was going out on my own
i didnt know how to explain to my little angel why mommy was alone,
i hoped that when she was born i would have someone,
to keep her and i warm,
i swear to myself the day i left,
that i would give my child the best,

the time came when i was screaming because of pain,
the young cab driver face was plain,
he looked at me and his face was trying to say everything would go fine,
i wanted to smile i had to shine,
as i was screaming and smiling, and trying to have joy,
i realized noone was gonna be by myside
when we arrived at the hospital i let out a big sigh,

the nurses rushed me in,
in a matter of time i wanted to cry,
the door opened and there he was,
with that blue stuff and kinda lookin like a powderpuff,
he told me breath and stay calm,
minutes later she was born and she was twenty and half inches long,
i told him that i wanted to be with him
because i was in the middle of all this
and it just sorta came out,
i was expecting a pout and a shout,
but instead he handed me my baby and said without a dout,
you have a beautiful baby and i wanna help out.

T'BreezeyBaby

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rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
1 posted 2006-12-15 07:31 AM


Welcome to Pip!

That was really good! Good emotion

Larry C
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since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
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2 posted 2006-12-15 07:35 PM


Yup, a tough moment richly described. Glad you're here.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

whitelielovely
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since 2006-12-11
Posts 146
Australia
3 posted 2006-12-16 09:50 PM


my darling, what a hard life. welcome to pip.
-Lovely

"Love is the irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired."
Mark Twain

hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
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4 posted 2006-12-19 10:52 PM


wow is that a true story? it was expressed so well. so what happened after that?
god bless,
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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