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pencil&paper Member
since 2006-09-09
Posts 76asleep somewhere in my head |
I don't wanna be who you wanna see I'm just gonna be me I don't wanna run I ain't gonna hide and yeah you're gonna be defied I'm gonna be me no matter what so you can just keep your mouth shut I don't care what you think and I don't care what you say cause I'm gonna live my life my way "Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
my fave lines, "I don't wanna be who you wanna see" i feel the same way, it's too much effort to be a cuppie doll -Lovely "Love is the irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired." |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I don't care what you think and I don't care what you say cause I'm gonna live my life my way~ Very nice i really liked this last stanza i can relate to that well... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Not my favorite poem by you; it's a good idea but it has been used a lot and you, or at least I think, you need to add something more. Something that would make this poem stand out of groups of poems like this; it needs something special/different. I liked the first stanza though... It was a nice beginning to the poem. Thanks for sharing! "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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