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whitelielovely
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since 2006-12-11
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0 posted 2006-12-12 05:24 PM



i'm tired of being your fallback
i don't think that i'll catch you
this time it is finally here,
the time you learn what if feels like to fall

you can hurt me and
then come back
acting like nothing has
broken by your hand

i am too young
you are too much
we can't be anymore
b/c my heart can't take it

i know you'll just throw me back
into the rags i started in
so i'll go away wearing
the fake smile that you detest

i'm sad and broken
the wrost part you don't care
we weren't more that friends
but you killed me anyways

your stubborness won't
make me break again
i don't want you back
i'm done with my best guy friend


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1 posted 2006-12-15 12:08 PM


i know exactly how you feel, acually like exactly this was ok not my favorite but it showed emotion well... i think....
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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