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forever*wishing
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since 2006-05-29
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where my heart is

0 posted 2006-12-12 12:03 PM


your fleeing from some one, will this ever be done?
can you stop for a minute slow down, just hold on.


where will you get from running without quit,
you dont know where your going, you wont admit.


first of all, what began this casscading wall?
what was it that pushed you, shoved, made you fall?


you cant even say what pushed you astray,
it tugged at your heart, and you fled, ran away.


no one knows what why this terror arose,
but i think the answers here, right under your nose.


if nobobody can tell why you suddenly fell
maybe the one your running from is, you, yourself.


then where can you run to possibly escape from
what can never leave, or stop that monotanus hum?

~me

...ok, seriously just wrote this...totally random...so ya, just, w/ever

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the_girl_next_door
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since 2006-02-26
Posts 591
USA
1 posted 2006-12-12 10:41 PM


I actually loved this.. It was wonderful.. It had a great meaning to it and the ending was great.. keep up the good work and enjoy Piptalk

~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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