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forever*wishing
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since 2006-05-29
Posts 178
where my heart is

0 posted 2006-12-11 11:28 PM


blindly running to hide from whats bright
even if it means doing what isn't right
i find false happiness where the lost confide
and i find in the shadows my only dim light

wishing for a life without confusion and lies
but to get there you wont even find me try
hoping for more from this washed out heart
i cant even pull my own two feet apart

to walk i've discovered in the most unpleasent way
that you have to let go of the ground on which you stay
even though it may hurt at the commencement
you find happiness not just contentment

~me

...ok, ek.


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rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
1 posted 2006-12-12 05:00 PM


Its scary i can relate to all of this. It is so true. I liked the solidness of the thought and the flow and fluidness
the_girl_next_door
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since 2006-02-26
Posts 591
USA
2 posted 2006-12-12 10:45 PM


to walk i've discovered in the most unpleasent way
that you have to let go of the ground on which you stay
even though it may hurt at the commencement
you find happiness not just contentment


This was my favorite part.. Happiness is one of the most important things in life to me becuase you can have love and you can have trust and honesty but they don't always promise you happiness but if you are happy you already have everything you want and need....

You are very talented with your words.. we seem to kind of think alike in some ways..

Keep it up..

Heather

ps-going in my library!@#$

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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