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Teen Poetry #8

Where reality begins

whitelielovely
Member

since 2006-12-11

Posts 146
Australia

0 posted 2006-12-11 08:58 PM

Just sitting here all day
Kinda bored in everyway
Not having that much fun
So I decide I’ve gotta run

This is senseless, this is drastic
Life is fenceless, cuz we think it’s plastic
Gonna run away, hide from the day
And everything else b/c it’s in our way
Going for the outside, never thinking about
The inside that’s always out
It’s harder than it looks to keep this up
I’m tired and think I’ll give it up
Life is fenced in
Cuz this is were reality begins

Almost there,
Looking at my prize
So that’s what it took
So see with these new eyes

I go to touch it
And everything just
Seems to fade away
They says b/c it must

This is senseless, this is drastic
Life is fenceless, cuz we think life is plastic
Gonna run away, hide from the day
And everything else b/c it’s in our way
Going for the outside, never thinking about
The inside that is always out
It’s harder than it looks to keep this up
I’m tired and think I’ll give it up
Life is fenced in
Cuz this is were reality begins

I think I made it
Things strange are new
It’s starting to kick in
All the things that I knew

It’s finally easy
I’m going back
The best choice I ever made
Was based on this fact

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2006-12-15 12:02 PM

Wow Lovely, I kept thinking of my favorite stanza and i couldn't pick one they were all amazing i don't know why this doesn't have anymore posts to it it is amazing my favorite part tho is:
~This is senseless, this is drastic
Life is fenceless, cuz we think life is plastic~
So True

hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

whitelielovely
Member

since 2006-12-11

Posts 146
Australia

2 posted 2007-01-01 10:45 AM

thankyou hunnie, it's one of my faveorites.

"Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it
everyday."

Noelle - age 7

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