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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
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Australia

0 posted 2006-12-09 06:56 PM


Ella....


With eyes so innocent, a smile so bright
Hair so blonde it shines in the light
Just like your mum so many say
Ella just smiles and turns away
I was lucky to have such a beautiful child
Let’s just hope she doesn’t turn out as wild.

You’re the apple of my eye and the spirit of my fall
The reason I live each day is for that special call
“Mummy I love you” is what I live to hear
I will the hug you tightly and hold you forever near.
A guardian angel may be watching over you
But please remember, mummy loves you no matter what you do

I’ll take the blame for my friends, but die for the ones I love
Ella’s my life she means more to me than the peace of a dove
This world is messed up in so many ways
You’re my daughter Ella and that’s the way it will stay.

Dream, when you sleep
And I’ll cuddle you when you weep
Smile, when life scares you away
Just remember I love you, no matter what anyone may say.

© Copyright 2006 A Typical Aussie Chick - All Rights Reserved
rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
1 posted 2006-12-10 04:15 AM


Aww this was really sweet. Well written and from what i picture in my mind she must be very pretty.WEll written

One of my favorites

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2006-12-10 09:08 PM


i love this poem it was beautiful... what a nice thing to write a poem on... very good.
hunnie

Better a witty fool than a foolish wit.
- Shakespeare

pencil&paper
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since 2006-09-09
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asleep somewhere in my head
3 posted 2006-12-10 09:42 PM


awww that's sooo sweet
it was beautiful

"Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet

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