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RevengeIsMine
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0 posted 2006-12-09 06:24 PM



Santa's Coming.... For Ella

A sky shines upon the sky
As Santa is leaving he waves goodbye.
Now a long journey will lie ahead
This journey will take place while you are in bed

Santa gathers his reindeer in total there is nine
With him in the sky it will forever shine.
His red sleigh holds the presents on many
For he has been a saviour to the world and his kindness is uncanny

Tonight a the world will sit tight
For Santa is coming there is no need for fright
So rest your head and go to sleep
Your first Christmas is here and I promise not to weep.

© Copyright 2006 A Typical Aussie Chick - All Rights Reserved
pen&paper
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1 posted 2006-12-10 02:09 PM


wow. i really liked this. but i don't understand "and I promise I won't weep"
Just try to explain that a bit more.
             toodles,
                 Pen


hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2006-12-10 09:26 PM


how old is ella now is it her 1st christmas?
hunnie

Better a witty fool than a foolish wit.
- Shakespeare

RevengeIsMine
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3 posted 2006-12-11 01:00 AM


Hunni Ella is 6 months old and her first xmas... so im very excited....

The bit about the weeping... is atm i cry alot about xmas because its never been important to me.. so much other stuff happening. but now for once i have never been so excited

RevengeIsMine
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4 posted 2006-12-11 01:02 AM


Hunni Ella is 6 months old and her first xmas... so im very excited....

The bit about the weeping... is atm i cry alot about xmas because its never been important to me.. so much other stuff happening. but now for once i have never been so excited

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5 posted 2006-12-13 12:13 PM


I hope she has a good christams and that you make it special to you too...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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