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forever*wishing
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since 2006-05-29
Posts 178
where my heart is

0 posted 2006-12-09 05:59 AM


im sitting alone on my bed in the cool afternoon
the sun will be setting oh so soon

my head full of thoughts of you holding me tight
in there it all just seems so right

but in this reality we call life
i couldn't get to you if i spent every dime

im wishing today that i could be with you
that this one little wish would come true

hugging my knees i close my eyes
i fill my head with you and my lies

your holding my hand as i hold yours
im the one you love and the one you adore

but if i go on dreaming these things in my mind
will it push me down when again the truth i find

i use these as pretend happiness and comfort
but it doesn't stand up against the love of yours

this is all too confusing i just want it real
i want this broken heart to heal

i wish with everything in me, with every part
that you will come and rescue my heart

~me

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pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
Posts 513

1 posted 2006-12-09 12:50 PM


I just absolutely love everything you write.

I could relate to this one even more so than your last if that seems possible.

      Great job. Goin in my library.

poemqueen
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since 2006-12-06
Posts 26

2 posted 2006-12-09 04:28 PM


gorgeous poem
tapper798
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since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
My own world
3 posted 2006-12-10 11:47 AM


aww this is so cute. I loved this! Something I know I can, and many others, can relate to. Keep it up!

AIM-beatufu1tragidy

Tell me what you think about being open, about being honest with yourself.

forever*wishing
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since 2006-05-29
Posts 178
where my heart is
4 posted 2006-12-11 11:12 PM


awww thanx yall! = )
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