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Tempest
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dont eat paint chips!!!!

0 posted 2006-12-06 07:36 PM




serated edges make this all disapear
while your sitting on the floor with only your tears
hurting with every aching bone
it just seems so cold

hold the towel to the cut
while you see it bleed through
you finally broke down
the names finally get to you

scream out in violent frustration
as you bleed out the pain
sit alone and cold
and pray for the rain

i wanted the tragidy to be re-writen
i want the fear to go away
these are my solomn wishes
so wont you live today
wont you live today

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1 posted 2006-12-08 12:57 PM


wont you live today, the title drew me in and i wasn't dissapointed very nice Tempest. i really like this one by you...
hunnie

Better a witty fool than a foolish wit.
- Shakespeare

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