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nick_lyss
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0 posted 2006-12-05 03:56 PM



             Why
  Why can’t I seem to get over you
  Why do I love you so much still.
  Why did you lie to me.
  Why does everyone to hate me.
  Why does everything always to go wrong.
  Why can’t people just let me be
  And let me love you

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rhia_5779
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1 posted 2006-12-05 04:27 PM


Why don't you add more to your thought. Put images into it let us see the circumstances that you mention.

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2006-12-06 12:06 PM


I agree with Rhia. show more feeling show us sadness anger etc. but i think you have something going on here courtney...
hunnie

Better a witty fool than a foolish wit.
- Shakespeare

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