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Mr. Omniscient
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0 posted 2006-12-02 09:43 PM


Your recent deviation has only conjured altercations.
I think your mind is in need of an alleviation
To clear out the messy variation,

I establish declarations,
And you’ll be the source of my declamation.
You’re a follower,
An animation that can’t seem to establish his confrontation.
You think this change to fit the new trend works towards your compensation.
But in your fellow student’s prestige, or estimation,
This only leads to your elimination.

© Copyright 2006 Alexander Higginbottom - All Rights Reserved
Tempest
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dont eat paint chips!!!!
1 posted 2006-12-03 06:33 PM


hipocracy is spelled wrong
pen&paper
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2 posted 2006-12-03 08:01 PM


I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and BELIEVE me... i know what u mean!

great write...i can relate

pen&paper
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3 posted 2006-12-03 08:01 PM


I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and BELIEVE me... i know what u mean!

great write...i can relate

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4 posted 2006-12-04 12:25 PM


wow, Mr. Omniscient i haven't seen you here for a long time acually i havn't seen you anywhere nice having you back, i liked this poem yet again your use of words amazes me very nice write...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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