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Dance one more dance
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Dance one more dance |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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Hey baby, I’ve got something to tell you So come, Come Dance with me I know it’s a slow song I know you don’t know it But I’ll sing along and you’ll soon catch on I need to tell you something I need for it to be okay I need you to let me in Your heart I need you to tell me What you feel for me Is it what I Hope it could be? Would you love me If you had the chance? Baby now’s the time you’ve got me in a trance Baby you’ve got something to tell So I’ll come dance with you Yeah, it’s a slow song and you know it too And we’ll sing along to the words You say It’ll be okay I’m listening What else will you say? You say you’d love me if you had the chance you suddenly stop us in mid-sway Then you slowly –oh I’ll never forget this day- You slowly lean in And stop my heart You lean in and Fireworks start You say you’ll love me if I give you the chance There’s no one here now But lets dance one more dance… |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
This came from the heart, i can relate. You make it so real |
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pencil&paper Member
since 2006-09-09
Posts 76asleep somewhere in my head |
i love it i mean l-o-v-e it i already told u in person but hey i thought i'd review anyway  "Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow the story to thins was welcomed i really liked the flow and the concept in this poem... hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
thanks guys!!!!!!!!!! i know candles you told me. < |
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MixedChica Junior Member
since 2006-11-10
Posts 34 |
wow, there arn't words for this, I wouldn't change a thing. I can completly relate and i love this. I guess people have already said all this but it is true. You should be proud, its good. |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
hey ya'll. thanks agian. muchas gracias. gratzi. etc. |
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