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Teen Poetry #8

The Dove Of Faith

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2006-12-01 07:44 AM

First Off.. This Poem just came from nowhere i just started writing and couldnt stop.. Inturept it the way you think u should, thats if it is inturpretable at all...

The Dove Of Faith

It’s too hard to say you’re hurting
And it’s too complicated to surrender
So many times your fears get the better of you
And your wounds weep and are tender
It’s not easy to be the one everyone expects,
If you try to fulfil everything, it all ends up a mess

It didn’t matter who we looked like or how much we weighed
We were led to believe what was on the inside was all that mattered
But it was all another ploy and one of life’s many serenades
Never trust the one you think knows you the most
You will never be good enough they will just judge you and boast

Angry faces will always be judged
No matter your size, shape or how well you can be budged
Only place trust in the ones you love
Let your faith fly across the ocean on the back of a dove
Here it will be safe for many years to come
On the back of that dove your faith will remain a secret to all but some.

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

1 posted 2006-12-01 04:24 PM

wow i know were u are coming from with this one (hmmmm how did i know??) and this put it all sooo clearly for me to see. thanks for this read. it was really nifty.

whitelielovely
Member

since 2006-12-11

Posts 146
Australia

2 posted 2006-12-11 09:13 PM

thanks for showing me how i feel in words that make sense.

-Lovely

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