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baby_gurl908
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since 2006-08-22
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0 posted 2006-11-29 06:27 PM


"I dont break my promises Lexus..." is what the piece
of crumbled up paper you handed to me said.

I thought to myself for a moment or two when I
relized you promised me you would take me
far away from this life,
the life I cant put up with...

I felt tears falling down my face,
they were cold but most of all unwanted,
I didnt want to cry for a promise you made me,
but most of all cry for you.

I couldn't belive what was wrote down,
I wanted to belive it but for some odd reason i didn't,
you know that all i want to do is run far away...

I haven't talk to you in forever,
and for you to remember that filled my heart,
I've been missing you for awhile now,
and i relized I haven't broken my promise to you.

I pulled out my phone and sent you this text,
" I dont break my promises either Steven, I still love you..."

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lilchica_o7
New Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 1

1 posted 2006-11-30 12:38 PM


even tho he promised u jus kno ur da one who is tru let him kno wat he missin cause i kno how u our feelin

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