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A Cowboy’s Girl
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A Cowboy’s Girl |
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WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
He rarely calls me by my given name, It’s always darlin’, sugar or babe. When he kisses me and pulls me close, My heart beats so fast I’m nearly comatose. Other girls have to worry about being hot, But he wants me, not something I’m not. He really loves me, I rest assured, Simply because I’m a cowboy’s girl. I don’t want some city man, At midnight I like roughened hands. His farmer’s tan, his movie-star grin, I only feel safe when I’m talking to him. He loves me for real, and yes, I’m sure, Simply because I’m a cowboy’s girl. When he smiles at all, I can hardly think, Much less when he gives me that secret wink. He’s still a little awkward when we hold hands, He still calls his mama ma’am. He’s made every other guy a blur, And I’m proud to be this cowboy’s girl. I don’t want some city man, At midnight I like roughened hands. His farmer’s tan, his movie-star grin, I only feel safe when I’m talking to him. He loves me for real, and yes, I’m sure, Simply because I’m a cowboy’s girl. It may be hard for you to understand, But cowboys are a different breed of man. Stubborn and loyal, loving and true, You know that he means it when he says, “I love you.” I don’t want some city man, At midnight I like roughened hands. His farmer’s tan, his movie-star grin, I only feel safe when I’m talking to him. He loves me for real, and yes, I’m sure, Simply because I’m a cowboy’s girl. When I stopped trying find the right guy, and concentrated on being the right girl, the right guy found me. |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
yeeeee hahhhh!! man that was a cool read. i enjoyed this alot, cowboy girl  |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
As usual good job telling a story. I loved this as I love pretty much all your work. You make the characters come alive and be real. It makes me feel I know whoever you are riding about If Water fairy would lend me some talent I could try and write , writers block. I would be extremely proud I had even half the talen. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
awe man, waterfairy i loved this sooo much... it reminds me of me was it suppoesed to be a song? cuz it seemed like one cuz you repeated the 1 staza a few times. but i hope to read more soon going into my library  and Rhia i know exacly how you feel ha, man i'd love to have half your talent waterfairy ...hunnie A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
hm. i love my country boys as well. goodjob.<3 [ms.cortney] |
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chiLanta Junior Member
since 2006-12-01
Posts 47 |
beautiful poem i love it im a country gurl so i know what you mean |
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