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This Kind Of Momment ( My True Story) Plz Read!!
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This Kind Of Momment ( My True Story) Plz Read!! |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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This Kind Of Momment My life’s been hard, depressing and sad But so many times before now I have wanted to hold your hand I’m a mum at 16 and still living at home I’m scared and afraid and all alone. I met you when I never thought I would You changed my life and made everything good I couldn’t stand for you to leave me you were to good to let go I wanted you to be with me for all of eternity but fate told me it wasn’t so My parents pushed me to be a slice of perfection I was supposed to be a dancer who didn’t want affection I didn’t want to dance but they just didn’t understand They’d given me all the opportunities in the world and I wanted to be in a band! It was just another party, some more drugs and booze To me this was normal, a bit of fun; after all I had nothing to lose “Oh come on Jess, Its just a party come with us, don’t make us plea It was a boring night and a few friends begged me I should of listened to the guy I loved, we fought for hours until he left But now almost a year and a half later I know he knew best I was drunk and it was late My friends had gone and for u I’d wait You were on your way to come and get me As I sat on the beach watching the sea A friend I knew from ages ago Stopped to talk and cuddled me so I pushed him off me but he wouldn’t accept He was off his face on weed and on me he leapt I was scared as he ripped at my clothes, I was screaming for help but nobody came His skin against mine, his lips on my body I tried to fight back but all I felt was shame It was raining and headlights slowly appeared You arose from your car and ran to be near You pulled him off me but it was too late After all you couldn’t help me I had been raped You punched him but he pulled out a gun He shot you twice and screamed “It’s Over I’ve won” Blood poured from your chest, you were in trouble I rang for an ambulance and told them to be here on the double. I cried as you gave life away The man I loved was dead; there was nothing anyone could say The doctors said I would be ok, I was on the pill and a condom was used They didn’t really care about the fact that I had been sexually abused 5 months later I found out I was pregnant and that I couldn’t terminate the baby When I was asked about adoption I replied maybe 4 months later baby Ella arrived She had been a twin but the other didn’t survive Now I am stronger than ever before Ella’s doing well and rolls on the floor I love her so much I wouldn’t change a thing As I rock her every night to sleep, a lullaby I sing My mistake has cost us all, a family a son, my parents their little girl So many of us take what we have for granted but everyone must learn to walk before you twirl I miss you so much baby, and I know u are watching over me I will love you forever and I know you can see Sunshine, hail rainbows or rain, This kinda moment is only a moment and it wont be too long til I’m with you again |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
well jess, im going to say it for the like umm...one millionth timei am sooooo sorry for what happened and that i really feel for you. this was beautiful and sad.....a modern day tragedy. this could be the work of the next keats, ballzac, blake, or even shakespear! love ya and talk to you tonight, TEMP [This message has been edited by Tempest (11-25-2006 12:48 PM).] |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Hey Temp, Thanks for your comment.. This was so hard to write but i couldnt continue to write because tis was blocking my way... Thanks Hun Luv Jess |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Wow this was so good. I can't relate but it all felt so real. My new favorite write by you. And one of my all time favorites. |
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MixedChica Junior Member
since 2006-11-10
Posts 34 |
Terrible things happen in this world, and i admire you for being able to live through that and raise Ella by yourself. I'm glad she's healthy and happy. This is a great poem and it must have been hard to write it. I love this poem and wouldn't change a thing. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow thas was so amazing i'm sorry you had to go through all that, sometimes the best poems in life are stuff that you didn't want to write but you had to. i'd have to say this was one of those best poems  i'll be praying for you and Ella, hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Thankyou all for your comments loved reading them all.. |
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