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Its all over |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! 
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take away everything it hurts too much to breath your sinking now all you want to do is leave you close your eyes and look at the light nothing came out right i said im sorry the ground looks so far away when your looking over the edge and now that your falling off you wish you had stayed in bed |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Yeahh Its good, not ur best but good... I liked it |
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