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Teen Poetry #8

Undefined Perfection

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

0 posted 2006-11-20 07:40 PM

"Undefined Perfection"

Does it matter that I'm not
a perfect prototype
shaped by society's view
of what they think is right
and ideal in this world

I won't be a robot
programmed by
the deranged
who think
they know best
when really they don't

Because perfection is in
the eye of the beholder
not definitely formed
solidified with an edge,
and straightforwardly read

Not easily defined
but loosely understood
to be what you see,
an individual's thoughts
and view of the world

All concieved in the waters
of a melting pot

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

1 posted 2006-11-20 08:20 PM

man....itl like the begining was really good and then as i read more i just fell for this piece! man ur good!

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

2 posted 2006-11-21 12:28 PM

oh my freakin gosh this is amazing! i LOVED it! i can completely relate, although i wish i could be able to do that, you know, completely do whats right, not what people want to be right, and be myself, not what people think i should be...but ya, anyway, this was awesome!

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