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forever*wishing
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since 2006-05-29
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where my heart is

0 posted 2006-11-20 01:32 PM


i know this isn't me
the person i cant help but be
i've grown so accustomed to this act
that i cant easily go back

but everytime i see you smile so fake
i know you can see in side me its all about to break
the real me's building pressure inside
and for not much longer it will hide

soon i know it will explode
i'll be the person that none of them know
my hearts just waiting in hopes i'll turn around
waiting for falsity to be drowned

in silence i stand alone i will wait
so that i may start a new slate
i'll give time for my friends to forgive
this act is just like an explosive

[[ok, just wrote this...i was thinking about this lil kind of poem in the car on the way home from a party, and i felt like i cant be myself and that no one knows who i really am...and that person is about to show....]]


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buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03
Posts 400
outside in the rain
1 posted 2006-11-22 12:17 PM


then show your true self becca!

people will love you for who you are, not who you are trying to be. And if they dont...then..then..well, you know..it doesn't matter! but i know you have friends around you who really do care, and you should know that.

-missy

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