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Color blind racing
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Color blind racing |
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MixedChica Junior Member
since 2006-11-10
Posts 34 |
We will always be racing In black and White Jungle feaver spreds like disease But racisum we cannot fight Oreos and Wiggers They're all just name brands A bad way of intergration But no one's got bigger plans Its all come down to this The steryotypes are real But because slavery was so hard Colored wonds cannot heal The KKK took something away And rose up fear in out hearts But all thats left of those captured souls are burnt up colored parts The wall of color built higher then ever Our suffering only fractions of reality But our differences hating us And we can't fit into the other's formaility Hot combs in our nappy hair Our roots straighting out But people with color blind eyes Is a dream i highly doubt |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Wow.Very nice write. A couple of grammar and punctuation errors. Chica why don;t you fix those. For the title how about Color blind maybe |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
Ahhhhhhh spelling errors okay I know we're not perfect but seriously spell check before you post All though there are still good ideas and thoughts in this poem -Ash- |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow amazing prospect. yes, we all now it's there but no body wants to say it and i'm glad you did. it's true although no body wants to admit hey i am racist although a lot of people are. you wrote this very well not an easy subject to get people to understand the harshness of it...  hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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