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penguin5
Junior Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 21
Washington

0 posted 2006-11-17 11:44 PM



But it hurt

How did it come to this
Never should I have done it
As you lay there crying
And I have nothing to comfort you with

Your friends say to talk to you
But what the hell do I say
There is no going back
There is no starting again

In an attack of bitter laughter
I realize the morbid irony
That the thing that hurts the most
Is silence

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rhia_5779
Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
1 posted 2006-11-18 05:38 AM


Tell us what hurt
Tempest
Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!
2 posted 2006-11-18 01:04 PM


this really initialized the pretense of a free based write, really interesting though as it followed good flow. i accede what was previously said.  to fully understand the depth and perception, and also the true reason of the piece itself, you need to state what has caused this feeling of hollow remorse.
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