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Alaina
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since 2007-06-16
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0 posted 2007-06-24 11:51 PM



The air is so cold, I can’t feel my face.
Times like these, I feel my life is complete.
I have been taken to a brand new place,
And life tastes so sweet.

The wind is wrapping me in its embrace,
It’s got me so tight, I never want to leave.
The music’s so loud, the cars vibrating from the bass.
This is the best moment of my life, I believe.

I feel infinite when speeding around the curves,
I never want it to come to an end.
This is exactly what everyone deserves,
The feeling that you’re about to transcend.

The people I love are with me,
And I know they all feel the same as I do.
It’s like I’m flying through an endless sea,
It’s almost too good to be true.

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
1 posted 2007-06-25 01:20 PM



I feel infinite when speeding around the curves,
I never want it to come to an end.
This is exactly what everyone deserves,
The feeling that you’re about to transcend.


WOW. very nice. i like this part alot. it describes my love of driving alot.

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