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synthetic
Member

since 2006-06-10

Posts 70
ontario, canada

0 posted 2006-11-15 11:23 PM

I'M BACK MY FRIENDS, TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK.

You realize you're in love and it's alright;
When making mistakes before that special person is unnoticed.
Unseen because that angel of yours;
He finds a way to make it right, to make you shine.

You can feel that your love is mutual;
When you're spending time with that special person,
And as you leave to walk away
You don't look back, because you know she'll be there tomorrow.

You know that your love is pure;
When you watch someone as they sleep.
Not thinking of what you'd like to do with them;
But rather, how you could wait there for an eternity, for them to wake up.

You know your love will last;
When there's been a problem between you and the other.
As you think over your fight later on you feel at peace;
Looking inside yourself, you see your feelings, they've fixed themselves.

Love teaches us;
You're his shining star and so remember, you'll never be wrong.
You don't need to look back, love will bring you into tomorrow.
Stay there still for an eternity as you should, she dreams of you.
Know that wrongdoings may never capture a heart, only open its eyes.

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

1 posted 2006-11-16 07:36 PM

wow synthetic, its good to see a new one from you man...ummm, sorry if ur a chick, its been awhile and i dont remember ur gender, hope u dont get offended.

aside all the remberence, your new poem is exatly what i expected from you...something out of the ordinary and REALLY creative, and catchy with the flow of it. i loved it.

~Tempest~

Flipnfly62992
New Member

since 2006-11-16

Posts 5

2 posted 2006-11-16 07:42 PM

This is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.

I know that might not mean much from a rookie like me, but seriously.

Its so out of the ordinary and creative and just amazing.

¢¾Dani

synthetic
Member

since 2006-06-10

Posts 70
ontario, canada

3 posted 2006-11-17 01:47 AM

Might I begin this reply by saying thank you. I appreciate the feedback I've received thus far. Tempest, don't worry about it... forgetting my gender is of no importance... but for the record, I'm a MAN... trying to grow a beard as a matter of fact! Not coming along too well, sadly. As for you "rookie", I don't believe in that term; you write or read poetry... maybe both, and that works for me. Besides, look at it this way... I'm a rookie in comparison to somebody else... and so it goes on! Thanks again for the comments, it feels good to post again. I'll be looking for more of your pieces guys, and I'll be looking to post again quite soon. Cheers!

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