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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2006-11-14 12:27 PM



Hindsight
hunnie

i hate it whaen you look down on me,
because there's more to me than you can see,
you treat me like i don't belong,
you've always done this, all along,

how can you be so blind,
maybe hates messing with your mind,
i nedd help yet you refuse to see it,
you ignore me, in your world, no sister of yours is in that big of a pit,

well i'm not a child i don't need your friendship,
i've tried once before, lost, and i don't double dip,
i'm not stupid, retarded or slow,
you'd think that after 15 years you'd know,

i wish i could look up to you,
but that is something i could never do,
because you are not always right,
i know that now thanks to hindsight.

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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filociphur
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1 posted 2006-11-15 03:05 AM


How long have you been writing for Hunnie?
hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2006-11-15 10:34 PM


ummmm about 6 or 7 months...
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