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buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

0 posted 2006-11-11 06:31 PM

Looking in the mirror

at this invisible face

this soul has vanished

without a trace

Only the memories

when left behind

and still I mourn

for a love I can't find

A soul that was happy

now lives in strife

walking in the shadows

of my empty life

Should I end it all,

or try to be strong?

it doesn't matter

you wouldn't notice if I was gone

Was my heart fooled

by your deceiving lies

come back to me

wipe these tears from my eye's

Bleeding for the truth

struggling to find your heart

but you don't feel the way I do

and it's ripping mine apart

But until my soul is found

I will never let you know

you'll have my heart forever

but I must let you go.

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

[This message has been edited by buttercupbaby (11-12-2006 12:05 PM).]

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

1 posted 2006-11-11 06:49 PM

This was so good. I really liked it. It had flow and I can relate. One of your better writes.

Morn is mourn though.

nick_lyss
Member

since 2006-08-21

Posts 88

2 posted 2006-11-11 08:29 PM

i liked this missy. really well written.loved those letters you used.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

3 posted 2006-11-12 12:05 PM

thanks rhia! gosh i am almost suprised you liked it! lol jk, thanks alot

oh, woops, that is supposed to be "mourn" i didn't mean to do that, sorry about that!

thanks nick_lyss! it's called "chick" if you have like microsoft word or something you can see if its on there!=]

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

4 posted 2006-11-13 01:30 PM

What letters? stop confusing me ahhh. I can't see them.

I am not that hard to please , lol hey. awesome write.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

5 posted 2006-11-13 02:04 PM

hahaha...thanks again.

oh she's talking about the font i used to write the poem[i think?] lol so i think you can see them

well, ttyl!

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2006-11-14 12:26 PM

i loved this nice flow

hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

7 posted 2006-11-14 01:27 PM

AWWWWW...
i loved it...
it flowed well...and everything fit...
nice. = )

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

8 posted 2006-11-14 05:26 PM

thanks both of y'all=]

im glad you liked it hunnie! i [also, and this is big of me to say, lol] thought i had pretty good flow..? ha ha i haven't thought that in a while!

and thanks forever*wishing im glad you liked it.

love,

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

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