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LviaLviaquiez New Member
since 2006-11-11
Posts 1 |
Hey, This Is my first time posting my stuff on this web site, so tell me what you think! but please dont be brutal!! I keep messing up I can't seem to make my wrongs into rights I always seem fake Because I'm sounding redundant To every sorry I say And every time I say it It always takes away, A little bit of trust We took so long to gain And puts in its place Nothing but aching and pain As much as I try I can't stop screwing up But I thank the lord every day I have friends like you Who see me at my worst and still always help me through. |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
welcome to pip! nice first post! : ) i look forward to reading more posts from ya in the future...see ya 'round pip |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Di , I'm honored. I already read this. I think you made some of my crittiques. Read my stuff!!! Put some of your other stuff on. I had a hard time crittiquing, some of the others are wayyy better poets\crittiqiurs and would be better than me at helping you. xoxoxoxo Go on Aim later Rhia in case u didnt figure out its Jordalou interesting sn btw |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
V(your names to hard to type each time), if you write stories you can post them in Passions for prose. |
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