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From Heaven To Hell In 0.5 Seconds (My Story)
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From Heaven To Hell In 0.5 Seconds (My Story) |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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Latley a few friends of mine have been writting a book, and i'd love to share it with you. Hope You All Enjoy............ From Heaven To Hell In 0.5 Seconds (My Story) Co Written By Sparkles(Kirby-Ann), Miss Sophistication(Liana) and RevengeIsMine(Jessica) Alysia- Jayne couldn’t believe what she was going to do. The desperation to be accepted had finally taken over. Nobody really knew how hard it was for Alysia-Jayne to become a parent, especially at such a young age. AJ gave birth to her baby a week after her 16th birthday, a healthy gorgeous girl. her parents disapproved of baby Jade and sent Alysia-Jayne to live with her aunt. AJ was used to lots of attention but this had now changed since she had her baby. She had lost all of her friends and was no longer expected to attend school. Jade was the love of Alysia-Jayne’s life she would never regret falling pregnant but she hated its consciences. Two days ago AJ’s best friend had arrived back in town. It was her 16th Birthday Party and she wanted desperately for Alysia-Jane to go. Alysia-Jayne knew she shouldn’t have said yes but she needed to prove that having a baby didn’t change who she was, she was sick of being teased and ignored she just wanted to have some fun. Her aunt warned her not to go and AJ promised she wouldn’t but she lied whilst her aunt was sleeping, AJ placed the capsule outside the bedroom window and clutching onto her purse she lifted her skirt and climbed out. Joe had safely stashed his cocaine into his pockets. He didn’t want his girl friend to find out that he is using. He knew that he shouldn’t be doing it but it was a special occasion and he needed a bit of fun, after all it’s not like he was addicted. He pulled on his jacket and headed directly for the front door. Kaydee sat herself down near the table, she was disappointed that she couldn’t find the money to board at school or to even have the power re-connected, but she knew that working two jobs could only just pay the rent. It frustrated her when she saw a group of girls walking passed holding their I-Pod. Kaydee sat slumped in the chair, life hadn’t really been triumphant for her and maybe that would be the way it remained. |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! this was amazing, it really was just simply amazing. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
its good but it needs more explantion in first paragraph, and more lead up second need more background, leaving the reader in the blank and third is a fragment of the puzzle. Wicked title! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
interesting. this is going to be a book? if it is seems like something i would read very good... hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Hey, Thanks Rhia... [This message has been edited by RevengeIsMine (11-12-2006 07:29 PM).] |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
NOTE TO ALL: THIS IS THE FIRST CHAPTER ONLY... UNSURE IF THE NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE PUBLISHED OR NOT... |
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