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Teen Poetry #8

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baby_gurl908
Junior Member

since 2006-08-22

Posts 15

0 posted 2006-11-08 04:33 PM

This is hard

but baby i got to go,

Even know i love you,

and im leavin this unfinished,

This is the begining of the end of us.

Im sorry really,

but i dont think you understand whats wrong,

My minds twisted with confusion,

I dont want to go...

My bags are packed,

But its my heart that keeps stoping me dead in my path,

Telling me hes the one sweety.

Thats such a lie,

Hes not the one he doesnt even try.

Love is to strong for me and you,

even if it feels so right its wrong,

So heres to our last time together,

Our last kiss of lust,

The last glare into your beautiful blue eyes,

These last moments just make me want to cry.

Its time to go,

heres your keys take them dont make this any more harder than it already is...

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

1 posted 2006-11-08 06:53 PM

good but it has too many spaces.

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

2 posted 2006-11-09 02:50 PM

yeah

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