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You’ll Always Be My Daddy
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You’ll Always Be My Daddy |
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Mystical New Member
since 2006-09-21
Posts 5 |
You’ll Always Be My Daddy By: Mystical It seems like yesterday when I was unborn I wish I could go outside this womb and look into my father’s eyes I wish I go back and finally see your face But I know Ill never get that chance When I look back And see how many years gone by seems like only yesterday All those days without you All those years you missed I wish you could of shared my world with you But I can’t just redo everything Since I’m still learning to cope without you I would scream your name out When I was lonely Then I knew I was truly missed you No matter how loud I screamed I still will never see you I’m not sorry and i'm not mad Because I promised myself I would not cry I can not deny who you really are anymore Because I’m just hurting self I can no longer hate myself for still loving you I would call out to you and hear the plain echo hitting me But there was nothing in the world I wanted more But you There are days when I miss you the most When I feel all messed up Like I’m forever falling in this pathless field of sorrow I could feel my deepest darkest feelings come out Like a onion unfolding its layers I would feel shreds of tears running down my face And I find myself calling out your name again Since that’s all I had A name If I got just one chance to look at you It would only be my sweetest pleasure Just to see you But after all I just have to let you go You never cared and I have to live with that forever But I always wondered if I let you down If you were impressed with how I lived my life so far If you could see how beautiful your daughter’s grown Then maybe you would see how much you really mean to me No matter how you disappoint me Someday your going to find out That you’ll always be my daddy |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Liked this alot. There are days when I miss you the most When I feel all messed up Like I’m forever falling in this pathless field of sorrow I could feel my deepest darkest feelings come out Like a onion unfolding its layers I would feel shreds of tears running down my face And I find myself calling out your name again Since that’s all I had A name The onion was good description |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i understood this b/c i can really relate to this very good... hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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