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Someone cares..stuck in my heart
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Someone cares..stuck in my heart |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Where I found you, I do not know. I was abandoned on your doorstep, alone with nowhere left to go. A friend I will never be able to forget. Words can't explain how much you mean Not enough thank yous possible to thank you Too little time to be for you, what in you I see I will cherish the friends I have forever,old and new! An angel sent from the sky, true in spirit, loyal through precious a priceless find. Always in my heart,is you. A mini poem. I'm running out of ideas for friendship poems. Suggestions for this? |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Where I found you, I do not know. I was abandoned on your doorstep, alone with nowhere left to go. A friend I will never be able to forget. very nice beggining the end sort of lost it's brightness from such a strong start although i did like this poem greatly... hunnie  p.s i told you i would pop my head back in here  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
yay |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
Words can't explain how much you mean Not enough thank yous possible to thank you Too little time to be for you, what in you I see I will cherish the friends I have forever,old and new! I didn't like the 2 thank yous in one line. Maybe you could change it to say something like "not enough words possible to say thank you." or something. Otherwise, very good! AIM-beatufu1tragidy |
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