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Teen Poetry #8

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Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

0 posted 2006-10-30 08:07 AM

So here we are,
Having fun.
Messing about,
In the sun.

So it seems,
To the outer eye.
For me it makes,
Me want to cry.

We both know,
It lingeres there.
All the kisses,
The moments shared.

Funny how things,
continue to change,
But somehow always,
Stay the same.

It didn't work,
We went seperate ways.
Why is it that I,
Long for those days?

The thoughts I fight,
Are pushing in.
Ceasing control,
I can't give in.

I long for you,
You touch my lips,
You want me too,
And then we kiss.

Belinda Black

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

1 posted 2006-10-30 11:05 AM

wow.
perfect flow.
thats all i can say...it was good = )

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

2 posted 2006-10-30 11:25 AM

thank you !! It's quite different from my usual writing style but i suppose different is good !! :P

thanks again!

Belinda~x

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2006-10-30 03:24 PM

wow that was beautiful belinda i liked it had a very nice flow as noted. hope to read more soon...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

4 posted 2006-10-31 05:02 AM

Thank you very much

I've read a few of your poems and am very impressed

thanks again !!

Belinda ~x

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