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Tempest
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since 2006-04-28
Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

0 posted 2006-10-29 09:40 PM



siting in a delicate facade of lies,
a perfect dream is born.
forever the vendetta holds,
and consistintly i am torn.

this web of unlawful lies is spun
i dont know where to begin.
forsaken and forlorn in fears,
the insomnia sets in.

bleeding dry the masquerade,
it hurts to even breath.
i am instintaneously drawn,
to the invisioned version of me.

testing the possible limits
of everything ive ever seen
i know that im only a stitch
of the fabric of reality


This is the only life you have, so live it to be remembered

© Copyright 2006 Bryan Girton - All Rights Reserved
jarrett
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since 2006-05-10
Posts 72
Ut, USA
1 posted 2006-10-29 10:06 PM


WOW I loved this poem, it's excellent Very well done I love these prhases!
bleeding dry the masquerade,
it hurts to even breath.
i am instintaneously drawn,
to the invisioned version of me.

testing the possible limits
of everything ive ever seen
i know that im only a stitch
of the fabric of reality

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
2 posted 2006-10-31 12:13 PM


My lil Mate does it again, U always make me believe in wat u write.. I tell ya ur an awesome poet. Good Work Hun xxoox
the_girl_next_door
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since 2006-02-26
Posts 591
USA
3 posted 2006-12-02 12:11 PM


Wow!! that's about all I can say.. you really did a great job with this one.. you never cease to amaze me.. loved it.. so i'm "bumping" it back up to the top... much love ~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
Canada
4 posted 2006-12-02 12:39 PM


last stanza was amazing i really liked it...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
5 posted 2006-12-02 10:42 AM


Gotta add to library
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