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rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
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0 posted 2006-10-29 12:26 PM


DEDicated to Rasa and eve

A kind of species prepared to listen to endless nonsense.
The person who can even tell you what you meant.
Who is not afraid to tell you the truth, empty of lies.
Giving you the whole before you hear it from someone else.

Bravely defending you against any odds.
Willing to take your side, even if you are wrong.
Whose confidence surges into your sinking heart.
Keeping you strong from a distance far apart.

Catching your stumble, picking you up again.
Recreating your smile   slightly damp from the rain.
The one who gives you random hugs because they love you.
Ready to hold your hand to help you get through.

A silence with them is never awkward, it a quiet. Break in time.
Sharing the base of friendship, just a little peace of mind.
The most pure type of person, who will be there for you till the end.
Covered in beauty, full of angelic sweet ness, a precious rare Friend.


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Mr. Omniscient
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since 2006-10-28
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1 posted 2006-10-29 12:50 PM


This a very well written poem. You should enter the best friend challenge.

rhia_5779
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2 posted 2006-10-29 01:05 PM


I did but I am writing something else for that.
MixedChica
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since 2006-11-10
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3 posted 2006-12-05 12:01 PM


Rhia you truley are a wonderful friend. this brought tears to my eyes. I miss you and i don't deserve a friend as great as you. I love you with all my heart
rhia_5779
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4 posted 2006-12-05 01:38 PM


Glad you liked. I hope i get to see you chica when i fly home over break. If someone will hav a sleepover I can see all of you. LUv to u too.


pencil&paper
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since 2006-09-09
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asleep somewhere in my head
5 posted 2006-12-10 10:23 PM


i LOVED this you described a true friend really well and this is totally going in my library

"Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet

whitelielovely
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since 2006-12-11
Posts 146
Australia
6 posted 2006-12-12 05:25 PM


what this about contest

"When you find that you have found yourself, you find that you won't have to look for much else." -Amanda Ann

rhia_5779
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7 posted 2006-12-13 08:12 AM


the friends challenge was around awhile ago.
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