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PoetrySinger
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0 posted 2006-10-19 10:32 AM


Why does everything seem to happen to me?
Why can't the world just be fair and equal?
Why does everyone hate me?
Why can't they just let it be.

Who I am is unique and rare,
So stop trying to change me.
Every person on this Earth should not be
Clones of one another,
But unique,
And special.

Why does everything seem to happen to me?
Why can't the world just be fair and equal?
Why does everyone hate me?
Why can't they just let it be.


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Tempest
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1 posted 2006-10-19 09:34 PM


no one ever said life was fair man. i know people say this alot but in my short life i have realised how short life is, from drug problems(which are over thank god) to other unmentionable things, you should focus on the better things in life rather than the down side. i know sometimes this seams hard and you kdnt ask me for a long lecture i know. but i just think (after what i have been through) people dont know what they got untill you lose it (sounds like THE GAYEST thing ive ever said but dude, heed this advice)
PoetrySinger
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2 posted 2006-10-24 10:34 AM


Hi,I'm Female Names Megan


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3 posted 2006-10-28 01:32 PM


Once again, I disagree. I think this was UNBELIEVABLY well written, good flow & all that. I think you chose a topic that all teens (especially me) can relate to at somepoint or another.
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