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PoetrySinger
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0 posted 2006-10-18 01:21 PM



The Bride and groom go
hand in hand
it takes one woman
then a man
to start a life what
a beautiful thing


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PoetrySinger
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1 posted 2006-10-18 01:30 PM


This lets me no that marriage is beautiful, but if it never happens for me look at what I have not what I want


patience_iago
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2 posted 2006-10-18 07:21 PM


i like this, but i wanted more yanno?

"There are some days where i believe i might die of an overdose of satisfaction"
-Dali

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3 posted 2006-10-21 11:30 PM


short and sweet. ~nice~
hunnie*

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tearsoflove13762
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4 posted 2006-10-22 02:47 AM


i understand the shortness in poems everyone has their preferences tho good write could be longer but it works
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