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Teen Poetry #8

Poetry2

PoetrySinger
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since 2006-10-16

Posts 54

0 posted 2006-10-18 01:18 PM

Poetry is words that are spoken
Once set out by those who wrote them
but yet vast lands of mysteries arrive
by each suprising poem
It makes me want to write
each has inspiration
and I like that kind
the one that inspire me
to write and take my time

PoetrySinger
Member

since 2006-10-16

Posts 54

1 posted 2006-10-18 01:32 PM

This is about what poetry takes from me it isn't much but I succeed

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
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2 posted 2006-10-19 11:36 PM

Poetry is words that are spoken
Once set out by those who wrote them

again very srong beggining but, this is just my opinion but it slowly fades to just a poem. you don't seem like you want the poem to end... but don't know how to make it longer, i think, if this poem were to be expanded with more feeling and depth in it, it could make a beautiful poem.
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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