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buttercupbaby
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outside in the rain

0 posted 2006-10-17 07:51 PM



the one question i have
no one can answer
sometimes i wonder why
i guess its because they know what they say would be a lie.

my one question on life
is:is love really worth it?
you always end up broken hearted, hurt, bruised
or else you were just completely used.

some people seem to have it all
perfect lives, perfect loves, perfect worlds
i look at them and think, it can't really be that way!
they must be total fakes, each and every day.

its either have that or no love at all
i think i would choose no love,
cause is love truly worth it?
the things you actually love in life, you loose, love is a total bandit.

love is something people think is great
but really isn't.
i don't think love is worth losing yourself for
it actually seems more of a chore.

i've made myself a promise
and its going pretty well
im never going to love
that way i won't experience my own personal hell.

love isn't worth it...
and it never will be.
at least it won't be for me.
[i swear]

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2006-10-18 12:32 PM


love is something people think is great
but really isn't.
~ yes it can be if you have the right person to share it with.~

i've made myself a promise
and its going pretty well
im never going to love
that way i won't experience my own personal hell.

wow that stanza just knocked me right off of my chair amazing flow...
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
2 posted 2006-10-18 09:46 AM


in l6 you put is twice just so you know. This was really good, the flow was uneven in some parts. Emotional piece!
buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03
Posts 400
outside in the rain
3 posted 2006-10-18 03:46 PM


thanks hunnie, thanks rhia. i put is twice b/c i couldn't figure out if it was supposed to be once or twice..haha...so i put is: is.
that way. anyway, thanks for the replies gals.

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

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