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rhia_5779
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0 posted 2006-10-13 05:27 PM


Prancing around the dance floor,
dancing with two left feet.
Cha-cha step, during the swing.
Not the best, but she won’t be ignored.

Hips swaying in motion to a slow song,
graceful arms draped over a shoulder
A smile stuck to her laughing face.
Gone wild, she will dance to the break of dawn.

Contorting in a twist, tendrils of hair flying around her head.
During the slide missed an intricate part, foot right as everyone else goes left.
Feet sounding as they jump, but her feet come
straight down, offbeat cracking a grin, dancing to wake the dead.

Raising her delicate painted hands to the raise the roof,
tens of fingers waving join her, following her into a
improvised beat, she twirls on her toes in a balanced pirouette.
Taking her lead, a mass of dancers tries to join her, only looking like fools.

Pointed toes spread apart lined with her shoulders, fingertips brushing the marble stone.
Dropping low, her foot slides in between her other hand and foot, break dancing steps.
Bringing up the pace, speeding through the movements, now doing her own thing.
Happy shine glowing on her face, moving to the music, unique and dancing alone.

Stepping to the beat, watching a dance move, trying to follow.
Adding her own sheen, mixing something new.
Merging a slide step to the swivel, two left feet.
She is a sight, red cheeks from laughing. The girl who really Can’t.
Dance.
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This is soo me!!LoL.I am not a very good dancer, so this kind of fits. LOl.But I never care and my friends don't either so ya.


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1 posted 2006-10-13 11:33 PM


I really enjoyed this one by you Rhia.  It was very descriptive and it actually felt like I was there watching the girl dance.
Enjoyed, as always.

~Alli~

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