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pip_man
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0 posted 2006-10-10 05:45 PM


The feeling inside,
It is hard to explain,
It is full of regret,
And it is full of pain.

You have let go,
Of what could have been,
You have let go
Before my love could be seen.

I know it's my fault,
But if only you knew,
How much I liked you,
This love could be true.

Now you are moving on,
Something I can not do,
Because the one I love
Is you and only you.


"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace."
Jimi Hendrix

[This message has been edited by pip_man (10-11-2006 02:53 PM).]

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1 posted 2006-10-11 11:38 PM


you are truly a great writer. i don't know hoe i could have missed this poem. yet another great write...
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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2 posted 2006-10-13 11:47 PM


Kind of short, but I loved it.  Keep sharing!

~Alli~

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