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Teen Poetry #8

Ivy

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

0 posted 2006-10-09 07:06 AM

A lit up orb of yellow light
let glow bring forth its golden shine.
Illuminating the brick wall
with Ivy leaves, creeping green vines.

Tearing apart wall’s foundation.
poking tendrils through open cracks.
adding dew drops to the dampness,
it will weaken then break in half.

At last, square bricks chalky red fall,
crumbling down, slow sets of motion.
Long-standing, masters garden wall
devoured by a plant, ivy .

skoolyardturtle
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 96

1 posted 2006-10-12 01:05 AM

hey, that was some great imagery there. Personally, I would have liked it to be longer. But, good job, great write.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2006-10-13 11:44 PM

Agreed. The imagery was great, I saw Ivy in a whole new way.

~Alli~

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