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Bestroyal
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0 posted 2006-10-04 06:40 PM


This is really short but i think it is good
Homework By bestroyal

Homework By bestroyal

felt like shredding you I felt like ripping you into a billon piecesI felt like feeding you to
my dog I felt like letting my baby brother Eat you I wanted to push you out in the rain but you’re just sitting there waiting for me to write down my answers but I rather flush you down and that are exactly what I did flush you down the toilet


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stargal
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1 posted 2006-10-05 10:23 AM


It's funny

"I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino            @-->---

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2 posted 2006-10-08 01:07 AM


oh unfortunatley i can relate to this ha-ha i thought this was pretty funny too but it had a bit of spelling/grammar errors but other than that good write...
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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