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nostalgic*pride
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since 2006-08-23
Posts 122
NowhereVille

0 posted 2006-10-03 02:17 PM


Where have you gone to
Will I ever see you again
Have I lost you forever
My love, my best friend

Are we only separated by darkness
And is this evil mine or yours
Can I hold your hand again
Will we ever find a cure

I read the signs
Don’t let friends drink and drive
But why oh why
Did God decide to
Enforce apon you
These lessons

And why am I alone
Walking through the cemetery
Holding my head up high
Are you beneath my feet
Or smiling at me from the sky

The worst part about your passing
Is not knowing where you went
Can you hear my broken hearted prayers
Or is my time ill-spent

I swear if I only knew
How to bring you back to me
I’d give my own life
So our love could be free

I ignored the warning
When you got into your car
I guess it’s all my fault
I killed you
I’m so, so sorry

And now I’m alone
Not a single hand to hold
Looking at your tombstone
Are you there

GIVE ME A SIGN
WHERE DID YOU GO

SPEAK TO ME FROM WHERE YOU LIE
AND LET ME KNOW

Walking through the cemetery

~~~Yes, I know I haven't been on in a while. I got a part time job, and I won't be on as much now. Sorry!~~~

© Copyright 2006 Haley May - All Rights Reserved
pip_man
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since 2006-07-15
Posts 70
Canada
1 posted 2006-10-03 04:18 PM


WOW! This was an amazing poem! I don't really know what to say, but it was very emotional. Great write!

"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace."
Jimi Hendrix

rhia_5779
Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
2 posted 2006-10-03 04:22 PM


`is this real? If it is `I am sooo sorry, I know how it feels to lose a friend. If not it is still amazing, one of the best by you.so powerful, and such a true story to much,
Brittany
Junior Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 32
Canada
3 posted 2006-10-03 04:38 PM


Wow, this was....amazing. It was so full of emotion and powerfull...wow...

~Life Ain't Always Beautiful~

hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
Canada
4 posted 2006-10-04 12:17 PM


oh this ain't real is it...? your love your best friend it's not *gulp* Byron is it? but great poem hope you enjoy your job and hmmm this was a very emotional write.
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

stargal
Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
OR USA
5 posted 2006-10-04 12:47 PM


This hits to close to home. It is a well written poem though...

"I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino            @-->---

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