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Stargal. hahaha
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Stargal. hahaha |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533
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Stargal is mean. she is cruel. I wish she would go back to school. She eats our cookies and leaves our protest She doesnt even encourage us to hurt her gosh. She needs to show us her changed poem that she shouldnt have changed. the end |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
LOL! Now your going to get it, you abused me in a poem and it's against the "guidelines", I think? Maybe not... jk Go back to school? How absurd when I’ve never left school before. I think you cheated though; and I never said I’d show you the revised poem, just “a” poem  "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
lol u HAFTA show the changed one! i'm workin on a poem actually...but i havent had much time to do it. when its finished i'll share it. IF yo ushow your revised one. |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
My dear Stargal doth I detect a fishy tone in your ever changing voice For if I do I will have to say in a high pitched squeak Ni... and the such Ni... with distaste Ni... for you scoundrel Have led your sheep astray ~Nice way to get on Stargal's case Rebekah... ^_^ |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
lol thanks : ) nice poem of yours i must say : ) |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Haha, funny. ~Alli~ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I do detect this cat has lost it’s meow For sneakier foe were never to be found But those who wander pip unseen Protesting at the slightest little thing… Cause’ persuasion isn’t their ultimate feat In a cliché so absurd as this you see Blackmail becomes the number one key In fighting against a mistake, a single cat did make… Yet, did you think this cat would just stand back? NO! The mask will be let down, for all your idle threats Blackmail will be named your number one regret In the drawing of your last breath… This cat has been revealed and the dog stands, at last! "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
lol, bekah masterpiece, touched me. The next mona lisa. lol. She needs to show us her poem To let us see how much she changed A very good poem that was fine! Really she has absolutely no shame. God, how could you, she ignores our protests too. And doesn't respond, nor will she tell us how to blackmail her. Like the mean person she is, she had to add twists. really you shouldn't have. now we are after you. for you no more laughs. weapon of underwear, invincible. |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
lol wow everyone has such talent. EXCEPT STARGAL!!!! BOOOO!!!! i think that you need to stop trying to be better than us! haha actually i think you should just show us your revised poem. pleaaase |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I'd rather not, yet, cause I'm not done with rewriting it... lolz Nice poem rhea, it's a beautiful duet with bekah "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
lol YEAH! |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
I actually like stargals poem here alot lol.. and the one a little before that about sheep astray.. both very creative.. this is crazy... but unfortunatley I will not add my own poem to this.. I ahven't been on in forever. I miss hearing what you guys have to say lol.. ~heather~ Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
to stargal you shall regret not showing your poem, cuz i have blackmail on you, you should have known, but maybe next time you'll think twice, before you tell us the color of you underwear thats my advice, we'll come across your poem one day, and you'll have nothing left to say, we'll torture you to make cookies for us, and we'll laugh if you make a big fuss, ha-ha just leave it up to us, that was a very good poem bekah.. acually i'd have to say it inspired me... to write evil things and plot revenge ha-ha... hunnie*  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
To Hunnie: You disillusioned fool! Threaten what you will For your end is very near The clock strikes… Oh dear! With the vertical slant of your feet Laid to rest in deaths sweet sleep… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Umm... I don't really know... but it's a poem and I'm feeling poem-ish "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
lol wow these poems are getting crazy! nice work everyone. |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
This light hearted jest has turned into a brothel befitting some toddlers not egotistical teens -not saying Stargal is anything like that But as some have said The cat may have bite but not like she thinks for I know what's right And to me this does seem like her opposition's win for they outnumber her full of need for her poem accompanied by cookies and maybe some tea just like the queen - but nevermind that because no ones a queen because I am the ruler The commander of this ship taking her throne -pointy crown and all Muwahahaha!! |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Uhh... Blue, can you splain some? The only thing I really got outa that last post was that you were the "ruler" and of course we all know that's not what you meant... lolz "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
I "think" I meant that we are acting childish and that all the "never changers" are right, but that I basically am the general, so to speak, of this band of mongerers. That's just what I think-sorry for the confusion  |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
*nods* That makes sense to me... All hail the general! *Salutes* "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
lol. i will not hail the general. grrrr haha : ) |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Well if you want to revolt bekah you got to complain in writing "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Follow proper proceedure soldier *mutters* no wonder you're still a private *shakes head* *salutes Stargal back* |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
I don't like being ruled by one who doesnt know how to do so it makes me sick to think i have to obey ones cheesy commands the only thing that needs to happen is stargal needs to show her new poem until then, im against everything. |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Well if you must know I truthfully am not the chief and commander of this sorry platoon full of wishy washy teens with attention spans that last until something shiny grabs your eye's gaze bringing out a side of childish antics In fact, I daresay that I knocked out the chief with my random actions like roping 'bekah's dragon and overtaking this castle full of crazy bright clowns sans brain intact with doopy smile and all my loose gown in flight An escapee's plight |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
lol i am so confused about where all this mumbling is leading what it does for us i have no clue it just makes us CONFUSED! So lets settles this one and for all just show us your revised poem at last! Please stargal? : ) |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
in continuation of previous. I held up my end know you must hold up yours or else i'll hafta hurt you and i wont have any remorse. so ha! |
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