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buttercupbaby
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outside in the rain

0 posted 2006-09-30 07:50 PM



i was going to the movies
to just hang out with friends
i knew i really shouldn't
cause i'd fall in love with you again

but i went anyway
i was trying to face my fear
im trying to move on
trying to get back into gear

so it was all going fine
till i saw you were not there
so i asked where you were
and they told me, and now im in despair

they told me about her
about how y'all are going out
but the worst thing of all
is that her is emma kat

see, i just broke down
right in the middle of the love scene
cause thats when it hit me
that i couldn't imagine you being so mean

you were my first love
so it makes it harder than ever
but emma kat is my best friend
God you're such a cheater!

im sitting here wondering
how y'all could do this to me
it hurts so bad
more than y'all could ever have the ablity to see

my heart was already breaking
but now its a clean cut straight through
i never ever wanna see either of you again
cause to me y'all were not true.

as im writing this dumb poem
tears are falling on the keys
and i realize once again
what you both did to me.
ya, kinda stupid.........my boyfriend cheated on me with my best friend today, and i just sat down and wrote this..kinda explains the last paragraph.....i guess...

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

© Copyright 2006 Marisa F - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-09-30 08:11 PM


Oh no, that's terrible!  I'm sorry to hear that your boyfriend cheated on you, especially with your best friend.
If he did something like that to you, yanno what, you're too good for him anyway!  Just know that things will get easier and you will get over him.

~Alli~

forever*wishing
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2 posted 2006-09-30 08:51 PM


david?...what?...or tyler...el confusea missy....lol...but call me?
stargal
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3 posted 2006-09-30 09:36 PM


Aww, Marisa I'm so sorry this has happened to you! But Alli is right, if they did this to you then they didn't deserve to have you as a friend. And even though it probably doesn’t seem like it right now things will get better in time, I pray that it might be sooner than later.

Just remember if you ever need to talk there's plenty of people on pip willing to listen

"I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino            @-->---

buttercupbaby
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outside in the rain
4 posted 2006-09-30 10:13 PM


thanks for the replies girls=)
ill be fine soon=]
and im glad i have y'all as friends so much!
thanks

rhia_5779
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5 posted 2006-10-01 05:45 PM


Loved the poem by the way, very clear and full emotion without forced ryme and just all out good.

The guys is a jerk to have done this, and does not deserve you at all. The girl, If she is your best friend, I wouldn't completely give up on the friendship, talk to her, when you stop hurting as much.  She was wrong, but you should tell her if she doesn't realize what she did , otherwise if you hate her for it and she doesn't know you know or doesn't know you hate her,  it will be really awkward\unconfortable for you.


If you need to talk, ready to listen.


Totally know how you feel, a couple years ago, the guy I liked, noone knew who he liked for sure, but everyone in my class thought he like me for a fact.  I like him for  year and then in the next year, My best friend started liking him and figured out who he liked, he liked her it turned out. she kept telling me he liked me and tried to get me to ask him out, when she knew all along that he like her. Then I had to painfully listen to her on a conference call ask him out and flirt with him. I hated her so much then. Now we are cool though.


hunnie_girl
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6 posted 2006-10-01 10:34 PM


I hate guys that have the audacity to do that to people... you know i think i'm gonna do some voodoo practice on him... but you know what they say keep your friends close and your enemies closer... i hope you're feeling better soon and i hope you know we are all here for you at pip...

as im writing this dumb poem
tears are falling on the keys
and i realize once again
what you both did to me.

that really was my favorite part it had so much emotion it made me wanna cry too...
hope to read more poems from you soon...
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

Brittany
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7 posted 2006-10-02 09:41 PM


I agree with hunnie, i loved thae last stanza, it was so full of emotion! the whole poem was good! I hope you are feeling better soon!

~Life Ain't Always Beautiful~

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