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Brittany Junior Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 32Canada |
They say a smile is worth a thousand words But your smile leaves me speechless A smile is supposed to be happy But your smile makes me cry I smile like nothings wrong When really I’m dying inside But at least now I’ve learned A smile can be deceiving ~Life Ain't Always Beautiful~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow, what a thought-provoking write. It kind of just made me think about all the people who I always see happy and wonder if maybe they're really crying inside behind the smile? I hope your smile becomes happy again.  ~Alli~ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I think this is my favorite one ever written by you, but I haven't seen very many of yours, yet. I liked how it makes you think, think about yourself and if you do it and if others do the same. It's not what I was expecting at first, I thought it would be another love poem, that is after reading the first few lines, but I love how you suprised me with this one. Thanks for sharing!  "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
short but thought provoking. It's really interesting to see what people really are like when people aren't around. The people you'd expect to be the happiest...normally hide it very well. Very good. AIM-beatufu1tragidy |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
short but sweet so much emotion in those lines good write hunnie* A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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