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powerxxx
Junior Member
since 2006-09-21
Posts 17


0 posted 2006-09-29 07:12 AM


I’ve never seen such an opening
I never had a plan for the future
I thought it would be alright
I guess I wasn't right
Time has had it's way with me
Broken hold of minutes
The numb counts of moments
Despite of the facts
That have turned into dust
The truth was so clear
But the plague that was so near
To the truth I held too dear
there are no such things
as a wish or the magical grail
to stop these betrayals
I've never known such sorrow
But I still try to look for a happy tomorrow
All the pain I hold beneath my skin
All the suffering I see with my eyes
Eyes that have seen
HELL in every persons eyes
Eyes that have seen
The science of lies
In everyone's eyes
All this time
I walked the Streets alone
With my soul that was about to be torn
And my heart that accepted every pain I’ve never known
I realized a long time ago
That I don't belong here

Because
I never saw the song being continued with me
written in it

The blood stained walls
That lies my tears on the floor
I won't stop feeding pain
Because my heart is just not the same
It's becoming so hard to live here
because I’ve never held any memories that were SO dear
As I bury my symptoms
I am shot from the inside
Despite of the loneliness
Despite of the nothingness
I know
With a faithful heart
That she will be here
That YOU will be here someday
And I’ll be waiting
Even if my time runs out
I will still believe in you
And believe that you always have and always will
Love me
Because even If I NEVER MET YOU
Know that
I love you
Just to hold your smile
Just to hold YOU between my arms
Know that
I'll be waiting
Despite of the way I live
I am happy to know that you are there for me
Even if I don't know you yet
I will always wait for you And love you

Because I know
Since the tide began to rise
Things have been
Very sad
Very empty
And I am not willing to give up
Till I be free and be with you

But for now I wait just to see
Just to see how my life
Just to see how this equation
Turns out
For the better or the worst
BECAUSE THIS IS THE WAY I LIVE
AND THIS IS MY
Science of life

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stargal
Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
OR USA
1 posted 2006-09-29 09:38 AM


Hmm... I get the odd feeling I am missing something when I read this poem? Or it could just be my bloody headache getting in the way...

Either way, it's an interesting piece. Maybe jumps around a bit much but rather different then a lot of poems I've read...

Thanks for sharing!

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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rhia_5779
Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
2 posted 2006-10-01 06:04 PM


This is really jumpy, and confusing. Maybe narrow it down a bit.
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