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The depths of love
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The depths of love |
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Mystical New Member
since 2006-09-21
Posts 5 |
The depths of love By: Mystical I cried and bled for you Yet I still loved you Thousands of tears I cried Again and again Tried telling myself that you were gone But I was just so tired of being so secluded, so empty Why did things have to turned out this way You left me alone Bleeding and screaming because of you Yet there you were right in front of me Driving me into my insanity The harder I tried forgetting about you The more I wanted you I would hear your voice calling me But when I looked back it was just an empty road Deceiving and grieving I just couldn’t take the pain My heart is breaking And you’re nowhere in sight Manly deceiving but also manipulating So don’t tell me all these lies Because you never loved me Now you left me to defend for myself With my arms wide open And my heart is very much broken How could I not see through your lies? You were my soul, my life and very much my spirit I was so into you Now I don’t know what to do? Can’t change the way I fell about you I can’t make my feelings disappear Especially because you taken my ability my love The hardest the part is Knowing that I’ll never be yours I’ll never be the one to tell you “I love you” I cried a million tears Got my heart broken time and time again So just to let you know I’m going to save myself from all this confusion Yet me fall this time Let me fall within my miseries And maybe I might wakeup Realizing that it was just all a bad dream Waiting to end. And you’re here right side me to take me as I am |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hi Mystical, First off let me say welcome to passions! I've never seen any of your poems before, and I might be late in my greeting, but I wanted to say welcome anyway. "Deceiving and grieving I just couldn’t take the pain My heart is breaking " I loved this part in the poem! It is probably my favorite part in the whole poem. It's very emotional to read... Thanks for sharing!  "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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