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powerxxx
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since 2006-09-21
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0 posted 2006-09-26 07:05 AM



The feeling of love , Could not be Written , Could not be Explained by
Words or Letters, Infact nothing can Explain, Express or Confess
The pure true feeling of Love, Love that was lost along time ago
A piece that went missing from our little planet and our huge world
And for you i will do my best to find what people call " Pure Love "
And dedicate it all for you
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The words have been drained from this pencil
Sweet words that i want to give you
Words kept in my heart
Without you knowing of them
And now i can't sleep becuase of them
I know
That i need to tell you
How much i love you
Everyday before i say goodnight

When we are together
I can seem to find a sun to guide me
I can seem to find a moon to help me
And i can seem to find my love loving me
When i am with you
I feel perfect

when i am pulled away from you
And we sit in our rooms in silence
I think about you, with all my heart, but
I fall apart
And try to hide my crying face
Trying to hide that i became incomplete once more

The magical thing is
That when i feel that
I can hear your whispers to me
Trying to calm me
Trying to show me that you are still here for me

Just promise me
That you will be here with me
And i will promise to love you
You don't need to ask me
You know that
All that i live for is you
I would die just to hold you
Stay with me
And i will show you that you are my
Life and my guiding shining star

And i love you to know
You are sacred to me
And i won't let anything that hurts you
Come near you
That i will and swear to risk my life
Just to keep that sacred smile on your snow white face
A smile that could change all the worlds
And especially mine
My life is about
Loving you
And the feelings that belongs to you
All i wish is to prove and give
Is Loving you

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nick_lyss
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since 2006-08-21
Posts 88

1 posted 2006-09-26 10:33 AM


this a good poem, keep writing
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2 posted 2006-09-27 11:35 PM


woah! this was awesome i loved it keep writing and posting...
hunnie*

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