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tearsoflove13762
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0 posted 2006-09-26 02:37 AM



I am sick of this feeling and cannot escape
cut through this plastic that I am wrapped up in,
enable me to take in the oxygen that will set me free.

Without your help I am coated in scars
remove them from my heart and let me be whole yet again.

I know your past with the other girls
take away these memories and let me just be in love with you and not have to worry if I will be treated the same or not.

My sudden realization of the feelings I have for you may have come as a shock to you, they may have also come too late... please just tell me whether or not I am too late so I can sleep at night once more.

© Copyright 2006 Laura Risner - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-09-27 11:38 PM


very emotional write i felt i understood you through your poem... hope to read more...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
2 posted 2006-09-28 12:11 PM


thanks hun!
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